Fangala the Flying Feline

Very nice. You need some commas, and it might make it flow better if every line doesn't end in a period. I love how you call the cat "an explosion ...

O' Stale Pastry, gaunt and gray, I ate you on a better day. Your flaky shell's like a crab gone dry, so sour it could make me cry. I sadly ...

Heck yeah! I got so attached to my characters once that I had them vacation for two weeks, when they should have been saving the world. Then again, I did ...

I was writing before I could write. I would dictate to my parents, then illustrate. My first book was called The Tale of Telling a Long Time Ago. (Hey, take ...

Whatever you do, don't change the last line! It's powerful. I love it. As for the rest of the poem, just for an exercise, try compacting it to get rid ...